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KamikazeTHC
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PostSubject: The arrival   Sat Sep 17, 2011 3:50 pm

Sean: Pfffffff.....not the first time I've been here. I'm hoping this is the last.
He was in the middle of a barren wasteland, far away from any landmarks. In the distance, he could spot out three low leveled demons pestering fresh spirits. "Please, let us go!",one of the spirits cried, but to no avail. The three demons continued, seemingly bored. "These clouds are so bor-ing...", one of the exclaimed. "Ever since we were left out here to greet the new ones, there was nothing to do!" "Day in, day out. The same thing." Said another holding a spirit, poking it. "Weak sprirts come in, and we do this. not one of them fights back." Then, the third demon notices Sean. "Hey, look! That one isn't a cloud! Don't they say that when a human dies and can keep their form, they have a strong spirit?"

Sean noticing the notice: Huh. I've been spotted. Pfft. Demons playing with clouds. What's up?

The three demons watch with an evil entent as Sean approached.
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PostSubject: Re: The arrival   Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:09 pm

I notice you keep posting it like
Sean: blah blah blah *blah blah*
can you change it to as if you are writing a story as that format of writing is used for making plays in theatres.

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PostSubject: Re: The arrival   Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:01 pm

(OOC:Cool. Kamikaze's used to that way.)

Sean: Yo.
D1: Get lost human!
C1: Save us!
C2: Please!
Sean: I'm not interested in saving you two.
D2: Hear that, clouds? No salvation.
Sean: Kinda thinkin' realistic here. Even if I could beat these guys, we're still in Hell.
D3: Yep.
Sean: It's neverending suffering.
D2: Yep.
Sean: Sazanka.
D1: Yep...Wha-
*Sean unleashes three consecutive spin kicks on the first demon. Demon 1 falls to the dirt unconsious*
D2: What the hell?!
D3: That's what I wanted for a LONG time!
*The third demon rushes in blindingly swiping, missing every swing*
Sean: Shunjinken!
*Sean uses a fast and strong kick to the demon's chest-*
Sean: Tengetsusen!
*Then backflips 7ft. into the air, kicking the demon up as well-*
Sean: Sanka Moushuukyaku!
*And finishes the combo by forcefully bringing his leg onto the demon's head, stunning it, and delivers three more powerful spin kicks. Demon 3 goes to the dirt out cold*
D2: Oh crap!
*The second demon attepmts to run but is stopped by Sean*
Sean: Shinten!
*He slams his foot down, causing a tremer that lifts the demon slightly in the air*
Sean: Gouretsushuu! *He throws 12 random on the demon's body, dazing it*
Sean: Kogahazn! *Then performs a reverse axe-kick that lifts him and the demon in the air and brings the leg back down onto its head, Knocking it out*
Cloud1: Whao! That was awesome!
Sean: Phew...it was nothing...
Cloud2: You saved us. Thank you.
Sean: Right. Now, get going before they wake up.
Cloud2: Yeah. Goodbye and good luck!
Sean: Heh...luck....yeah, you too.
*As the two spirits left, Sean noticed on demon waking up*
Sean: What's up?
D2: AAHHH!!

(Kamikaze can animate the moves he types. Just ask and Kamikaz'll show ya!...When Kamikaze finishes some)
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